The repetition of "O, my luve" in the first stanza conjures up the
He uses two different similes for his love — the rose and the melody, and
"that’s newly" and "that’s sweetly" describing those
similes. She is so young and fair that he compares her to the first rose of the
season in its’ purity and youth. His love is so sweet that she reminds him of a
soothing melody played in tune. I immediately feel that he has known no other
love like this. O, my luve is like a red, red rose, That’s newly sprung in June.
O, my luve is like the melodie, That’s sweetly played in tune. The second stanza
has a perfect rhyme at the end of the second and fourth lines — "I"
and "dry." In this stanza, the narrator reminds her and us that his
love is undying no matter what happens around him. His reference to bonnie and
the ocean, my bonnie lies over the sea?" As fair art thou, my bonnie
lass, So deep in luve am I, And I will luve thee still, my dear, Till a’ the
seas gang dry. The third stanza has an exact rhyme at the end of the second and
fourth lines — "sun" and "run." He repeats the endearment
"my dear" at the end of the first and third lines to emphasize his
affection for her. He also rhymes within the stanza using till, will, and still,
creating a pleasant sounding stanza. Included with these words is
"shall" which doesn’t rhyme but whose appearance is similar with the
double consonant "L." He clearly states that he will be in love with
her until certain occurrences happen in nature — "seas go dry" and
"rocks melt with the sun" which feasibly can never happen. In other
words, his love for her will last forever. Even though time goes by like the
sand in an hourglass, age will not hinder his undying love for her. Till a’ the
seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun! And I will luve thee
still, my dear, While the sands o’ life shall run. The fourth and final stanza
of the poem has an exact rhyme at the end of the second and fourth lines –
"awhile" and "mile." We also find Burns repeating "luve"
on the first and third lines, as well as beginning the first, second, and third
lines with "and" and continuing the first and third with "fare
thee weel" as if his persistence will make all the difference in the
outcome of their lives. He tells his love that he will come back to be with her
that she is his only love no matter how long he is away from her side. He wishes
her well-being and hopes that she remains healthy awhile for it seems he will be
gone from her for some time. And fare thee weel, my only luve, And fare thee
weel awhile! And I will come again, my luve, Though it were ten thousand mile!
reader during the first stanza. In the following three stanzas, he addresses his
words of devotion directly to her. His dramatic monologue clearly states his
love of this woman and everything about her. Burn’s use of nature in his
descriptions of this woman and his narrator’s adoration for her bring vivid
us to observe, but rather the feeling it derives.